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Poké's short (long) stories.; Only a chapter or 2 long for each.
Topic Started: November 9, 2014, 1:04 am (1,438 Views)
Cain Marder
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The heck just I read?! XD

We'll it brought me to tears how hilarious was everything, I like situation comedy^^
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" ... You welcome, I love you ... Ima gonna die now... Oh shit, here they come, I'm fuckin' dead, this car has no traction... NOO!! Don't kill me!! Anything but this! WHY I'M MAKIN' DONUTS?!?!"

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Shigitou burikaa
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Sniperskaya
April 22, 2015, 6:14 pm
The heck just I read?! XD

We'll it brought me to tears how hilarious was everything, I like situation comedy^^
He he. Glad ya liked it.
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Shigitou burikaa
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I would like to make a story based off my origin of coming onto these forums. Since i am making a story about my entire life (im not posting that here) i might as well make a story around my endeavors in these forums so far. So like my life story goes. I will continue the story as far as it may go. (Actually i will write it from when i found corpse party, all the way to now.)

I will get to writing now. ^^
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Shigitou burikaa
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Hello everyone. While this isnt my usual fanfic stories. I found it while i was viewing my archives on my ipad notes and it is from the FIRST story fanfic that i made.

It is about characters from mario, sonic and two others that i made. One about me and my friends having supernatural powers and about a dog and his... Very odd family. (The mother is a polar bear and dad is a lizard... Lol.)

Anyways, i only found chapter four, and i made this story when i was in like 6th grade so it is younger than trapped in anime and misfortune and despair. I will dig through all my stuff to see if i can find anything else. But no guarantees. Also, the chapter isnt very finished, so please just enjoy it as is.

unfinished Chapter 4


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Yoshie Shinozaki
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This was very well written, it looks like it belonged in a book instead of a fanfic. I liked the narrative ya took with this page the most, well thought out and not at all dragging.(At least to me it wasn't dragging)
I remember when I was studying for sixth grade, the most creative thing I came up with was some nit bit mock stories when playing Super Mario 64.

I hope we'll get to see more older work, this was entertaining.
"I Return This Nightmare. I Will Find You. Sleepless, Cloaked In Despair. I'm Behind You. Man Has Made Me Oh So Strong. Blurring Lines Of Right And Wrong. Far Too Late For Frail Amends. Now It's Come To Sweet Revenge. Desperate Hands That Lose Control. Have No Mercy On Your Soul."- Here Comes Revenge By Metallica.
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Yoshie Shinozaki
August 14, 2015, 1:41 pm
This was very well written, it looks like it belonged in a book instead of a fanfic. I liked the narrative ya took with this page the most, well thought out and not at all dragging.(At least to me it wasn't dragging)
I remember when I was studying for sixth grade, the most creative thing I came up with was some nit bit mock stories when playing Super Mario 64.

I hope we'll get to see more older work, this was entertaining.
Uwhaat?! Very well written? ..hm. I was scared that it wouldnt make sence.

A part of me wants to not believe you... But then again i dont have a single clue. It was made when i was a simple little kid. And back when i still liked the sonic/mario series a lot. And i have a LOT of grammar issues within this story as i do with trapped in anime (according to dom4ntas$.)


But i should basically be glad that you liked it so i will. ^_^ thank you for enjoying.
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Yoshie Shinozaki
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Trust me, hombre, it's actually really good, and I hadn't noticed any grammatical errors.(I noticed several in TIA and in CP vs AoT, but I looked passed it because I liked the premise)

And you know me, I see no point in lying, especially to my friends, so ya know I'm telling the truth.
"I Return This Nightmare. I Will Find You. Sleepless, Cloaked In Despair. I'm Behind You. Man Has Made Me Oh So Strong. Blurring Lines Of Right And Wrong. Far Too Late For Frail Amends. Now It's Come To Sweet Revenge. Desperate Hands That Lose Control. Have No Mercy On Your Soul."- Here Comes Revenge By Metallica.
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Yoshie Shinozaki
August 14, 2015, 1:58 pm
Trust me, hombre, it's actually really good, and I hadn't noticed any grammatical errors.(I noticed several in TIA and in CP vs AoT, but I looked passed it because I liked the premise)

And you know me, I see no point in lying, especially to my friends, so ya know I'm telling the truth.
Wow. Haha.... I guess it was because i had two major surgeries recently on my head that made me half stupid then.

Thank you for enjoying. Oh and i found the notebook and all the chapters. Sadly though, it was chapters 1-5 and five hasnt started yet. I will see about continuing it once more.
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