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Corpse Party: Hopeful Paradise; Thoughts on the start of my fanfic
Topic Started: March 22, 2015, 11:03 am (153 Views)
Cyclonestar
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Survivor of Heavenly Host.. Well, I will be.
I've been wanting to write a corpse party fanfiction called "Hopeful Paradise"
It's a side story after the events of blood covered but it features different characters who have to deal with Yoshikazu and a new Sachiko (It's not Yuki in this version and I do have an explanation for why that works in the story)I know it's the first thing you think when it comes to fanfictions besides from the X reader genre but I gave it a go anyway.

I released the first chapter and wanted to know if this is bad or decent. I know it isn't great because I honestly rushed the last part just so the actual plot can start:
http://www.quotev.com/story/6145060/Corpse-Party-Hopeful-Paradise/

I hope it is enjoyed. I wanted to put this here because this is a corpse party forum and in this section, you can reccomend your fanfictions and post artwork. That's probably it.

I would like to know thoughts on the scenario, characters and what is my stronger points. I already know about a lot of my weak points anyway ^^". Yes, I am aware that the end has a lot of flaws and/or plot holes but I hope it's a fun quick one to read and enjoy a little. (Even though, I am the same person who has a torture scene for everything I write, including straight out comedies and parodies. No, I'm not joking.)
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Shigitou burikaa
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give me a reason to care once more. new mod for the grt. -in sachiko I trust-

Ok. So i was just bored, going through the forums as a guest, when i stumbled upon this!

I read it and found it pretty intriguing. Good job, cyclone.
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Cyclonestar
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May 3, 2015, 9:43 pm
Ok. So i was just bored, going through the forums as a guest, when i stumbled upon this!

I read it and found it pretty intriguing. Good job, cyclone.
Thank you, I had thoughts about making a game version but I thought that I wouldn't be able to pull it off.
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