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Random Thoughts Thread; random randomness abound!
Topic Started: April 22, 2012, 2:20 am (31,815 Views)
Ist Kisaragi
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DeathkaiserG
July 2, 2016, 11:09 am
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July 2, 2016, 9:01 am
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you might wanna start story writing and presenting this idea to someone, I think if it doesn't already exist, it could sell pretty well
To be honest, ive got problems when i write my stories...

I could describe wonderful ideas, settings, leads. But when it comes to writing... arcs, dialogues, grammar, overall fell short.

Then i get disappointed and get bored. If you do want to search... search for my name on the fan fiction area of HH... i have created lots of one shot stories... unfortunately no chapter 2

Besides how do you do focus a background character without her making it look like she's important in a word novel.

Also i havent even got a story yet... just an idea about a background character carrying the main character team lol

First of all, I have to agree with the rest, Kaiser, this story sounds pretty awesome. (If understandably difficult to pull off.)

Second, once I read that, I for some reason, picture Haruhi Suzumiya, but only if she was different, yet still contained all of her power, and wasn't the main protagonist. (Namely, that her name just popped up for me.)
Whether by Windblast or by choke hold, whether by the steel of my Folding Blade or the swiftness of Blink, whether by Possession or by the power of thine Pistol, none shall evade either my Wrath, or my Mercy. For the Outsider gazes from his Void, the fate of all, are in the hands of those, marked by him.
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To be honest, ive got problems when i write my stories...

I could describe wonderful ideas, settings, leads. But when it comes to writing... arcs, dialogues, grammar, overall fell short.

Then i get disappointed and get bored. If you do want to search... search for my name on the fan fiction area of HH... i have created lots of one shot stories... unfortunately no chapter 2

Besides how do you do focus a background character without her making it look like she's important in a word novel.

Also i havent even got a story yet... just an idea about a background character carrying the main character team lol

First of all, I have to agree with the rest, Kaiser, this story sounds pretty awesome. (If understandably difficult to pull off.)

Second, once I read that, I for some reason, picture Haruhi Suzumiya, but only if she was different, yet still contained all of her power, and wasn't the main protagonist. (Namely, that her name just popped up for me.)
Thats actually a nice comparison. But this person knows that she has godly powers. She doesnt use it at all cause she like to focus on anime/novel/books (depends on setting). The antagonist unknowingly forced her to use that godly wrath on him
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Ah what the hell man?

Ive already got an idea of an ending scene already for the background character spinoff and i havent even made the story yet...

Why am i like this.
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to answer your first question, it is the Crooked Man, literally...
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Ah what the hell man?

Ive already got an idea of an ending scene already for the background character spinoff and i havent even made the story yet...

Why am i like this.
the story doesn't have to come together in order, so long as it comes together
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Ah what the hell man?

Ive already got an idea of an ending scene already for the background character spinoff and i havent even made the story yet...

Why am i like this.
the story doesn't have to come together in order, so long as it comes together
It doesnt help the fact that i actually thought of an actual verse (i dont have any idea yet bout the stories) after that spinoff. Seperate stories, one verse, one background character who is basically god.

To be honest, i begin to realize that im just thinking of cool things rather making a story.



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One character who is basically a god.......

I don't know bout that one, all I think is Suwako.
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July 5, 2016, 4:54 am
One character who is basically a god.......

I don't know bout that one, all I think is Suwako.
Suwako? Who exactly?

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Well i may have overdone it but more or less, thats how i think of her
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Sorry, Suwako is a Touhou character.


I thought most peeps know that here...
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