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| Zaion | August 14, 2015, 7:15 pm Post #851 |
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The one in question was an Ayu x Shiki romance one, and I wanted to see how a different writer would portray their romance. From what I saw, it was pretty much the reverse of what I imagined. Yoshiki was the one in power and Ayumi was the receptive one. It wasn't that good imo. The story was your average R-18 doujinshi plot line, just with Ayumi and Yoshiki. |
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Check out my fanfic Corpse Party: Blood Drive Aftermath. I can also translate from Japanese to English. Open to requests. | |
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| Yoshie Shinozaki | August 14, 2015, 8:06 pm Post #852 |
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The First Victim
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Funny you should mention the plot to some of the R-18 Doujinshi regarding those two, coincidentally I wrote a scenario where Kishinuma was in control of Shinozaki's form. Of course though, I based my writing off a Wrong End in Blood Covered (Repeated Fear) and she was umm... Asleep. Oh speaking of your story, I'm almost finished reading the whole story so I'll give my full input once I'm done.(Cool story, by the way, it's better than most Fluff I've read. But I'll admit I haven't read many) |
| "I Return This Nightmare. I Will Find You. Sleepless, Cloaked In Despair. I'm Behind You. Man Has Made Me Oh So Strong. Blurring Lines Of Right And Wrong. Far Too Late For Frail Amends. Now It's Come To Sweet Revenge. Desperate Hands That Lose Control. Have No Mercy On Your Soul."- Here Comes Revenge By Metallica. | |
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| Cain Marder | August 14, 2015, 8:14 pm Post #853 |
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I actually got to read that and I have to say, 10/10, would read again xD (that if I remember in which topic it was....) |
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Spoiler: click to toggle ![]() " ... You welcome, I love you ... Ima gonna die now... Oh shit, here they come, I'm fuckin' dead, this car has no traction... NOO!! Don't kill me!! Anything but this! WHY I'M MAKIN' DONUTS?!?!" " This keer | |
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| Shigitou burikaa | August 14, 2015, 8:26 pm Post #854 |
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give me a reason to care once more. new mod for the grt. -in sachiko I trust-
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Then your schedule is tight. Tight like a tiger, my friend. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ste teraz mojej obete. Vitajte v mojom herňa, zvieratko. Ja som teraz mučiť vás.![]() . ~ポケウォーズ9000™ i am servent to no one. I'm married to nana!
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| Cain Marder | August 14, 2015, 8:30 pm Post #855 |
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Or tight like a Rhino, more exactly, 30 Rhinos, Rhino Tank rush hype! (That will either cripple the Brits for sure now or at least will hold them off a bit, I have about 7 Kirovs in production.) |
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Spoiler: click to toggle ![]() " ... You welcome, I love you ... Ima gonna die now... Oh shit, here they come, I'm fuckin' dead, this car has no traction... NOO!! Don't kill me!! Anything but this! WHY I'M MAKIN' DONUTS?!?!" " This keer | |
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| Shigitou burikaa | August 14, 2015, 8:32 pm Post #856 |
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give me a reason to care once more. new mod for the grt. -in sachiko I trust-
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yeah.
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ste teraz mojej obete. Vitajte v mojom herňa, zvieratko. Ja som teraz mučiť vás.![]() . ~ポケウォーズ9000™ i am servent to no one. I'm married to nana!
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| Zaion | August 14, 2015, 8:48 pm Post #857 |
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Send me the link to it if you can remember. Would like to see what it's like. |
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Check out my fanfic Corpse Party: Blood Drive Aftermath. I can also translate from Japanese to English. Open to requests. | |
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| Yoshie Shinozaki | August 14, 2015, 9:03 pm Post #858 |
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The First Victim
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Oh uh... Okay then, here's my little tale I guess? To be honest, I'm a little embarrassed to show it off since it's such a weak read, but since ya asked, I can't refuse... I've become a much better writer since then, plus this was written in like fifteen minutes at the time... Why Am I Doing This?
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| "I Return This Nightmare. I Will Find You. Sleepless, Cloaked In Despair. I'm Behind You. Man Has Made Me Oh So Strong. Blurring Lines Of Right And Wrong. Far Too Late For Frail Amends. Now It's Come To Sweet Revenge. Desperate Hands That Lose Control. Have No Mercy On Your Soul."- Here Comes Revenge By Metallica. | |
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| Zaion | August 14, 2015, 9:26 pm Post #859 |
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oTZ Did you turn Yoshiki into a necrophiliac? Anyways, what wrong end was this? I can't really remember a wrong end involving Ayumi that left her body intact besides 2☆4 and 5☆7. |
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Check out my fanfic Corpse Party: Blood Drive Aftermath. I can also translate from Japanese to English. Open to requests. | |
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| Yoshie Shinozaki | August 14, 2015, 9:29 pm Post #860 |
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Yeah, I did. It's my kind of humor, though.(I have a very dark sense of humor... Necrophilia, grotesque dismemberment, you know... Musume much?) I kinda had an idea to have Kishinuma pick up five cursed Hentai pages then he blacks out and... That happens. But ultimately I scrapped it for personal reasons.(Even though that build up is far more tame than what I wrote) Edited by Yoshie Shinozaki, August 14, 2015, 9:31 pm.
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| "I Return This Nightmare. I Will Find You. Sleepless, Cloaked In Despair. I'm Behind You. Man Has Made Me Oh So Strong. Blurring Lines Of Right And Wrong. Far Too Late For Frail Amends. Now It's Come To Sweet Revenge. Desperate Hands That Lose Control. Have No Mercy On Your Soul."- Here Comes Revenge By Metallica. | |
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yeah.

11:49 AM Jul 13