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| Akaecius | Mar 3 2012, 05:18 AM Post #1 |
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This is a poem heavily inspired by the chants Emiya/EMIYA have. Critique/opinions are welcome but please don't kill me for my terrible English. Music to go with the poem Smith's Lament In the age of iron, fire and cold, a smith once existed, so strong, so bold. His weapons sharp and his wits so keen he would not serve those without self-esteem. The heroes, knights and kings so proud they all had no respect for the common crowd. The smith who would not serve those kings, with the common crowd he shared many things. One amongst many a hate deep and pure for those who had fallen to power’s harsh lure. But hate he shared and so hate he received the kings of old would not be deceived. Thrown in a dungeon and forced to make weapons one would think he had learned his lesson. But through solitude and time in prison the smith had learned what had clouded his vision, memories, of an age long forgotten, the smith's soul and body should be rotten. Memories of a smith all alone, forging iron in a hill of swords, his body impaled and his soul trapped one would wonder if his mind had snapped? Betrayed by his comrades and all alone his mind had wandered, no it had blown. To an age yet to come to a smith so bold, this smith who had yet to be buried in gold. This smith now altered by memories of old had changed inside - his heart had grown cold. The smith now clear of who he had been started a revolution from within. Sure of his justice and ready to lead the smith was sure - he wanted his countrymen freed. His heart free of the cold and now warm again was ready to let a female in. He fled from the castle and found her then bathing by a lake naked to the skin. He loved his sweetheart and she loved him they loved under the moonlight which now had dimmed. Yet something so sweet couldn't last for long his love was lured away with a sweet song. The kings had hired some minstrels so skilled they managed to leave her heart unfulfilled. Enraged and mad the smith raged a while until he learned of the kings' plan so hideous and vile. Yet again the fires of passion burned the smith now knows, no he learned. That these kings could not be forgiven he would have his revenge for which he had so long striven. Forging life is an honest profession although it can also lead many a man to obsession. Forging death is a smith's work through his deeds good or bad his life will exert. So weapons he forged, and he forged many he had an army to lead and not just any. The army of people, the army of man an army that has the will to win and can. Long he fought and battles he won, victorious he stood by a hill, in front of the sun. Those whom he freed and those whom he beat none would sit quiet on their seat. The smith was too powerful, too strong to be free and the people would see to that he wouldn't be. Betrayed by his army, by his people the smith now stood; impaled by the death he had forged; he now understood. What he had seen was what had yet to be the future in his own life, you see. And so he stood there, forging his iron, in this hill of death that he had himself wrought, if you do not pity the smith I pity you too, for give this a thought, the smith might be you. Edited by Akaecius, Mar 8 2012, 10:33 PM.
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"Are you literally balling my sack, are you dicking my shaft? Are you fucking holing my anus?" -Akaecius Master: Bradley Asher(Known to Holger as Nathair) Strength: B - Endurance: B - Agility: C - Magic: C+ - Luck: E+ - Prana Pool: 1262.5/2062.5 Riding: A - Rune Magic: A - Eye of the Mind (True): A - Magic Resistance: E - Monster Hunter: D Smithr Master: Yougimhei Strength: A - Endurance: C - Agility: B - Magic: A - Luck: E - Prana Pool: 1002.5/1102.5 Magic Resistance: E - Monstrous Strength: A - Territory Creation: B - Item Construction: A Harradr Master: Saisha I. Nazari Strength: C+ - Endurance: C+ - Agility: A - Magic: E - Luck: C - Prana Pool: 1300/1800 prana Magic Resistance: C - Independent Action: C - Clairvoyance: A - Monstrous Strength: A - Bravery: B Kelstrin Akaecius Naeseen - Master Class: Martial Artist - Rank 3 Servant: Alex Minoa Circuit Quality: A+ - Circuit Quantity: 1 - Mana Regen: 13 - Prana Pool: 0/33 Karategi: Unharmed(full power) A. Pius - Master Class: Martial Artist - Rank 2, Offensive Magus - Rank 1 Servant: None Circuit Quality: A+ - Circuit Quantity: C - Mana Regen: 9 - Prana Pool: 35 Ivory Talisman: 15/15 Prana | |
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| LordWonka | Mar 4 2012, 02:00 AM Post #2 |
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Here is one I wrote. Roses are Red, Violets are blue. Shut the fuck up, With your god damn QQ. I love you bby gurl, u know I luv u 5 ever. (Dats even more dan 4ever.) But for real, that is actually pretty good. Good job. |
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| Akaecius | Mar 4 2012, 02:29 AM Post #3 |
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Thanks! My English teacher told me I definitively had potential and that I should study English in the university. He compared it to Beowulf^^. But ya, I felt inspired one day and wrote it while I was fooling around in school. Math classes mostly. |
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"Are you literally balling my sack, are you dicking my shaft? Are you fucking holing my anus?" -Akaecius Master: Bradley Asher(Known to Holger as Nathair) Strength: B - Endurance: B - Agility: C - Magic: C+ - Luck: E+ - Prana Pool: 1262.5/2062.5 Riding: A - Rune Magic: A - Eye of the Mind (True): A - Magic Resistance: E - Monster Hunter: D Smithr Master: Yougimhei Strength: A - Endurance: C - Agility: B - Magic: A - Luck: E - Prana Pool: 1002.5/1102.5 Magic Resistance: E - Monstrous Strength: A - Territory Creation: B - Item Construction: A Harradr Master: Saisha I. Nazari Strength: C+ - Endurance: C+ - Agility: A - Magic: E - Luck: C - Prana Pool: 1300/1800 prana Magic Resistance: C - Independent Action: C - Clairvoyance: A - Monstrous Strength: A - Bravery: B Kelstrin Akaecius Naeseen - Master Class: Martial Artist - Rank 3 Servant: Alex Minoa Circuit Quality: A+ - Circuit Quantity: 1 - Mana Regen: 13 - Prana Pool: 0/33 Karategi: Unharmed(full power) A. Pius - Master Class: Martial Artist - Rank 2, Offensive Magus - Rank 1 Servant: None Circuit Quality: A+ - Circuit Quantity: C - Mana Regen: 9 - Prana Pool: 35 Ivory Talisman: 15/15 Prana | |
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| Akaecius | Mar 8 2012, 10:21 AM Post #4 |
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Damn, was the forum god the only one who read it? :( |
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"Are you literally balling my sack, are you dicking my shaft? Are you fucking holing my anus?" -Akaecius Master: Bradley Asher(Known to Holger as Nathair) Strength: B - Endurance: B - Agility: C - Magic: C+ - Luck: E+ - Prana Pool: 1262.5/2062.5 Riding: A - Rune Magic: A - Eye of the Mind (True): A - Magic Resistance: E - Monster Hunter: D Smithr Master: Yougimhei Strength: A - Endurance: C - Agility: B - Magic: A - Luck: E - Prana Pool: 1002.5/1102.5 Magic Resistance: E - Monstrous Strength: A - Territory Creation: B - Item Construction: A Harradr Master: Saisha I. Nazari Strength: C+ - Endurance: C+ - Agility: A - Magic: E - Luck: C - Prana Pool: 1300/1800 prana Magic Resistance: C - Independent Action: C - Clairvoyance: A - Monstrous Strength: A - Bravery: B Kelstrin Akaecius Naeseen - Master Class: Martial Artist - Rank 3 Servant: Alex Minoa Circuit Quality: A+ - Circuit Quantity: 1 - Mana Regen: 13 - Prana Pool: 0/33 Karategi: Unharmed(full power) A. Pius - Master Class: Martial Artist - Rank 2, Offensive Magus - Rank 1 Servant: None Circuit Quality: A+ - Circuit Quantity: C - Mana Regen: 9 - Prana Pool: 35 Ivory Talisman: 15/15 Prana | |
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