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[ACCEPTED]Alberio-second mod
Topic Started: Jul 28 2014, 01:57 AM (87 Views)
Alberio

Topic(s):Hunting the meteor Garlic 6 SP
Gourmet implantation 8 SP + Gourmet cells

Character: Alberio

Results:
14 SP total +gourmet cells

Request:
Bank SP

Upgrade special ability

Add technique.

Add under special ability+fighting ability

Changes
Bank 4 SP for total of 9

Upgrade Special ability to Special ability 2
Special Ability (Tier 2):Alberio has now been implanted with Gourmet cells harvested from a lich squid. In addition to the possibility for dramatically increased strength and stamina, he is now able to read the minds of targets he is touching (obtaining necessary tactical information about their immediate tactics and capabilities).

Intimidation (Tier 1):With the addition of gourmet cells, he is now capable of producing a menacing aura to ward off predators and intimidate weak foes. At present it is at its weakest and merely allows others to perceive the shape of his appetite devil.


Add technique:
Read thoughts
Type: Utility/defense
Range: Touch
Skills: Special Ability
[c]By touch ing the target, Alberio temporarily integrates his nervous system with their own. In doing this, he is able to determine the size and health of the creature in addition to their immediate thoughts and tactics. Through extended contact, he is even capable of delving into the targets memories.[c]


Add under special ability
Through a special form of "plunder neuron" Alberio is capable of extending small cells extending from his fingertips into the bodies of his targets. By linking these cells to the nervous cells in the target (typically touch receptors) he is able to temporarily integrate his nervous system into theirs. In doing this, he becomes aware of all the sensations in the targets body at a cellular level. By doing this, he also becomes aware of the targets cognitions, allowing him to literally read the targets thoughts. By maintaining the contact longer he is able to get more detailed information, even being able to view the targets memories.

There are however many limitations to this. Firstly, in order to work he must be able to come in physical contact with the targets epidermis, or at the very least a portion of their bodies that has nerve endings. As such he cannot use this by simply touching a targets hair, horns, claws or scales as none of these provide easy-access to a targets nerves. Generally, if the target can feel pain through it, he can integrate at that point, if it cannot feel pain, then he cannot do it. Furthermore he is not immune to any damaging effects the target may use against him while in physical contact. If the targets skin is venomous or incredibly hot he will take damage from this and cannot reasonably mitigate it. Finally he cannot read the minds of things which do not have discernible neuronal structures. Sentient plants, animate rocks, anthropomorphic water, GT robos etc. do not have neuronal systems that are compatible with this technique. Therefore, he cannot use it against them.

He now also possesses an appetite devil pictured below:
Appetite Devil


Add under fighting ability
By coming into contact with an enemy and linking their nervous systems together, Alberio can read the targets thoughts and determine any weaknesses they are trying to cover up, in addition to any health problems or physical shortcomings as his ability detects the entirety of a subjects neural system. While he needs only a millisecond of contact to do this for something about the size of a human, the larger the beast the longer the time it takes him to fully sync up their nervous systems and comprehend its cognition. For something as large as a blue whale, it takes him roughly ten seconds at this time, though only half a second for something the size of a lion or cow. And a full second for something the size of a rhino or hippo.
Edited by Alberio, Jul 29 2014, 10:58 PM.
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Umibouzu
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You'll want to update the Special Ability section of your application (the one that lists what your powers due in depth at this current level) as well
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Alberio

Done. Though imo those things seem just a tad redundant tbh.
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Actually they're used to explain your ability, your trait just denotes your current level of strength, not how the ability works, it's limitations or it's strengths and weaknesses.
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Alberio

Elaborated
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This topic has been approved by either 2 Staff members, or the Head Admin, it will now be moved to the appropriate forum
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