Welcome Guest [Log In] [Register]

Power Of Language

-
NOTICE BOARD


VERY COMMON EXPRESSION / IDIOM
PICTURE OF THE WEEK
Basic Tools for Forum Use-Sử Dụng Diễn Đàn
OK
...
Welcome to Ngoai Ngu Phap Anh. We hope you enjoy your visit.

You're currently viewing our forum as a guest. This means you are limited to certain areas of the board and there are some features you can't use. If you join our community, you'll be able to access member-only sections, and use many member-only features such as customizing your profile, sending personal messages, and voting in polls. Registration is simple, fast, and completely free.

Join our community!

If you're already a member please log in to your account to access all of our features:

Bạn hiện đang dạo chơi Diễn đàn với vai trò khách tham quan. Điều này khiến bạn bị hạn chế ở một số khu vực và không thao tác được một số tính năng thú vị khác. Nếu tham gia cùng cộng đồng nơi đây, bạn sẽ được quyền truy cập vào khu vực dành riêng cho các thành viên và được quyền sử dụng nhiều tiện ích dành riêng cho các thành viên diễn đàn. Việc đăng ký thành viên đơn giản, nhanh chóng và hoàn toàn miễn phí.

Đăng Ký Thành Viên Tại Đây!

Nếu đã là thành viên, mời bạn đăng nhập để hưởng quyền truy cập tất cả các tiện ích của chúng tôi


Username:   Password:
Add Reply
talk about my sister
Topic Started: Jul 14 2015, 02:53 PM (119 Views)
lexuantuan
Member Avatar

She likes dolls, because it's beautiful. She likes cooking and doing housework, because she doing housework is very good. She likes reading,studying and doing housework, because she's a hardworking. She likes singing. She hates a crowd, because it's noisy. She doesn't like playing and watching TV. She's afraid of spiders, lizards and toads, because it's dreadful. She loves walking, running and cycling, because it's help she healthy. She loves salad, because it help she beautiful skin.
Offline Profile
 
kgminhha
Member Avatar

lexuantuan
Jul 14 2015, 02:53 PM
She likes dolls, because it's they're beautiful. She likes cooking and doing housework, because she doing housework is very good because she can do housework very well. She likes reading,studying and doing housework, because she's a hardworking person . She likes singing. She hates a crowdS, because it's they're noisy. She doesn't like playing and watching TV. She's afraid of spiders, lizards and toads, because it's they're dreadful. She loves walking, running and cycling, because it's help she they help her be healthy. She loves salad, because it helps she her have beautiful skin.


* Một số điểm Tuấn cần lưu ý nhé t4 :
- Không cần có dấu phẩy giữa hai mệnh đề khi dùng "because" đứng giữa nối hai mệnh đề với nhau.
Ví dụ: She likes dolls because they are beautiful (NOT: she likes dolls, because they are beautiful)

Tuy nhiên, khi "because" đứng đầu câu, ta sẽ cần đến dấu phẩy giữa hai mệnh đề:

Because dolls are beautiful, she likes them.

- Khi viết / nói một đoạn văn, ngoài ngữ pháp, ta cũng cần chú ý sắp xếp các ý theo trật tự thích hợp để bài dể hiểu hơn và tránh trùng lặp từ / ý. Ví dụ, bài của Tuấn có thể sắp xếp lại như sau:

My sister likes many things. She likes dolls because they're beautiful. She likes singing, reading, cooking, studying and doing housework, too. She is a hardworking person and she can do housework very well. She doesn't like playing or watching TV. Besides, she also loves walking, running, and cycling. Those activities help her be healthy. She loves salad as it helps her have beautiful skin. There's one thing that she hates: crowds. She thinks crowds are noisy. She's afraid of spiders, lizards and toads. They're dreadful to her. tt1
Edited by kgminhha, Jul 15 2015, 12:20 AM.
Offline Profile
 
1 user reading this topic (1 Guest and 0 Anonymous)
« Previous Topic · Thực Hành Đọc - Viết · Next Topic »
Add Reply

"
Feliz Navidad (Gold) created by Sarah & Delirium. of the ZNR. Edited by NNMA
209 Lê văn Thọ st, Go Vap District. Tel: 08 3921 3114 - 08 3589 0903. Website www.ngoainguphapanh.com