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Narrative Essay; A CHANGE AFFECTED YOUR LIFE
Topic Started: Jun 5 2018, 09:44 PM (27 Views)
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My mother came home with a frustrated face which turned discomforted immediately when she saw me lying on the bed with a phone on my hand.
“Kristine, have you got your examination results? Do you know how disappointing it is? I can’t believe that you’ve passed a test that way”
I did not get anything from my mother. I even did not know what she was talking about , in fact, I’d joined lots of examination. How did I know which was mentioned? I asked her clearly. She told me it was the results of the examination test which was done last month in my school. I got 58/100 in Mathematics, it was definitely an unbelievable thing I’d ever received.
“Mom. Trust me. I’d done all my best. You can see that during these days I was concentrating on studying, right ?” I tried to find a reason for covering up my mistake.
“Stop talking like that. Don’t think that I did not observe the way you study. It was actually that you played your phone more than what you could study yourself. 10 minutes for Facebook for every 10 minutes studying. Remind of what you’d actually done.” replied my mom with angriness.
“I’ll take your phone. When you really think about changing that bad behavior, I’ll send it back” she continued.
Knowing that I was not able to palliate the truth, I kept silence and let my mom take my phone. Days afterwards were such terrible a time. I used to playing my phone, wandering webs to webs. In other words, I lived visually. However, thanks to the time without mobile phone, I started to think about proper schedule.
Without phone, I tried to spend more time on studying, hanging with friends, it was definitely a better life that way. I gradually realized that I’d spent too much time for useless thing that till now, when I started feeling that I need more time for my passion or even my work, it was a regret. More than that, it was a valuables lesson that everyone needed to once experience to contemplate for qualities in life.
After a time living a life without phone, my studying results seemed improve a lot. That also created a habit in myself. Now, I love talking with friends directly more than through a screen. Currently, I love studying without a phone lying besides. Every change brings me new experience. My life has been affected. Despite that fact, I still love that change.
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Jun 5 2018, 09:44 PM
My mother came home with a frustrated face which turned discomforted immediately when she saw me lying on the bed with a phone on my hand.
“Kristine, have you got your examination results result? Do you know how disappointing it is? I can’t believe that you’ve passed a test that way”
I did not get anything from my mother. I could not understand and even did not know what she was talking about , in fact, I’d joined lots of examinations. How did I know which was mentioned? I asked her clearly. She told me it was the results resultof the last examination hold test which was done last month in my school. I got 58/100 in Mathematics, it was definitely an unbelievable thing I’d ever received.
“Mom. Trust me. I’d done I did all my best. You can see that during these days I was concentrating on studying, right ?” I tried to find a reason for covering up an excuse for my mistake.
“Stop talking like that. Don’t think that I did not observe the way you study. It was actually that you've played got stuck on your phone more than what you could study yourself rather than studied. 10 minutes for Facebook for against every 10 minutes studying. Remind of what you’d actually done.” replied my mom with angriness anger.
“I’ll (take /) confiscate your phone. When you really think about changing that bad behavior habit, I’ll send it back” she continued.
Knowing that I was not able to palliate deny the truth, I kept silence and let my mom take my phone. Days afterwards were such terrible a time tome. I used to playing with my phone, wandering webs to webs. surfing from one website to another In other words, I lived visually virtually ???. However, thanks to the period of time without mobile phone, I started to think about a proper schedule for study.
Without a phone, I tried to spend more time on studying, hanging with friends, on other beneficial entertainment. That way, as I reckoned, made my life much better. it was definitely a better life that way. I gradually realized that I’d spent too much time for useless thing that till now, nonsense when I started feeling that I need more time for my passion or even my work, it was a regret. More than that, it was a valuables lesson Anyway, better late than never, that was a chance helping me recognise that everyone needed to once experience to contemplate for qualities in life. seek for sensible activities in life
After a time living a life without the cellphone, my studying study (results) seemed improve a lot apparently / quite progressive. That also created a helped change my habit in myself. Now, I love talking with friends directly more than through a screen face to face / in person rather on the screen . Currently, I love studying without a phone lying besides. Every change brings me new experiences. My life has been affected. Despite that fact, I still I love that change.
Edited by NNMA, Jun 12 2018, 10:59 PM.
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