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Topic Started: Jan 18 2012, 05:39 AM (63 Views)
Pat
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I got my one rp in which is better than I thought I'd do.

What did everyone think? It's been a long minute since I've rped as Loki...

Still, I'm not so sure it turned out epically awesome, but it got the point across ok I think...

Anyways, honest feedback is always appreciated :)
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Being honest, I enjoyed it. I don't think it was your best (no offense intended). But I did like Dave snapping, showing the return of Synn. Working at Wal-Mart, you got the customer service experience down perfectly lol.

I do think you could have been a bit harsher with your treatment/verbal assault on the sales clerk though. But that's just me being a bastard lol.

Good job Pat-man! :)
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Haha...I agree with you though!

Not about the you being a bastard part, about Synn snapping a bit more on Danielle (which this is all based on a true story minus snapping on the poor girl). I think I could have gone even further with it, but I just haven't written as Loki for so long, that's all I could come up with at that point :P
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