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Feb 25 2013, 06:28 PM
I like your take on it. You see, most of his readers say that his grammar is impeccable, but I'm not a fan of his sentence structuring. I'm down for some crazy vocab every now and then but it is difficult to find one that's done consistently, rather than the 'I'm running out of words to use without messing up my word rep, let's hit up thesaurus.com' method which truckloads of fanfic authors use. Would you, without any hesitation whatsoever, rate Endless Season over Aura's works? Is there any other fic up on that list with ES (or comes close...or a bit far, no problem)?
I like my take on it as well. :P

His sentences aren't structured, and that's what I have a problem with. It got to a point wherein I was actively cheering whenever I found a sentence that was made from a complete clause, so rare was it to find one. It doesn't sound good when you completely disregard the rules of a language and it's not done for some specific reason, like it is when you're writing experimental fiction. :eyeroll:

I'd definitely rate ES higher, because ES wasn't written for the prose, whereas Aur@tus' works are. You can tell he's trying to put emphasis on his linguistic skill, so the lack of it is more palpable than it is in ES, because ES is written for the plot. Which is good.

tbh I don't like many fics. I liked this multishot, though, 'cause it reminded me of a fairytale, so I'd give that a 7/10.
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Do you ladies read intense or gang type fics? I've read Life and currently reading the season 2 - Family (Taengsic and Yoonyul), I can't take this anymore, I feel slightly depressed reading it, I don't know why? I'm in the middle of reading Family, but my heart can't handle the story. I can handle drama or angst fics, but this fic is another level for me. :bleak: But I'm still curious what will happened next, and the 3rd season is on-going (Live).
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Should I stop reading or continue? :zonedout:
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Feb 25 2013, 06:55 PM
I like my take on it as well. :P

His sentences aren't structured, and that's what I have a problem with. It got to a point wherein I was actively cheering whenever I found a sentence that was made from a complete clause, so rare was it to find one. It doesn't sound good when you completely disregard the rules of a language and it's not done for some specific reason, like it is when you're writing experimental fiction. :eyeroll:

I'd definitely rate ES higher, because ES wasn't written for the prose, whereas Aur@tus' works are. You can tell he's trying to put emphasis on his linguistic skill, so the lack of it is more palpable than it is in ES, because ES is written for the plot. Which is good.

tbh I don't like many fics. I liked this multishot, though, 'cause it reminded me of a fairytale, so I'd give that a 7/10.
Gehehe, Artichoke is cute ^_^

Mmhmm, I understand where you're coming from with those points. A little part of me dies inside whenever I come across what I hope isn't deliberate mutilation of the language. :creys:

These posts about ES are really making me crave to read it from the beginning yet again...where oh where is kijeok? T_T Thanks for the link to the multishot, I'll definitely read it once I wake up tomorrow, haha. I normally steer clear from AFF due to some traumatising experiences in the past (yes, they were that disturbing), but I'll give this a shot. *curtsey*
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Feb 25 2013, 07:02 PM
Do you ladies read intense or gang type fics? I've read Life and currently reading the season 2 - Family (Taengsic and Yoonyul), I can't take this anymore, I feel slightly depressed reading it, I don't know why? I'm in the middle of reading Family, but my heart can't handle the story. I can handle drama or angst fics, but this fic is another level for me. But I'm still curious what will happened next, and the 3rd season is on-going (Live).
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Should I stop reading or continue?

Stick with it! :thumbsup: Reading Game of Thrones is a rollercoaster ride with people dying, but therein is part of the excitement.

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Feb 25 2013, 07:04 PM
Gehehe, Artichoke is cute

Mmhmm, I understand where you're coming from with those points. A little part of me dies inside whenever I come across what I hope isn't deliberate mutilation of the language.

These posts about ES are really making me crave to read it from the beginning yet again...where oh where is kijeok? Thanks for the link to the multishot, I'll definitely read it once I wake up tomorrow, haha. I normally steer clear from AFF due to some traumatising experiences in the past (yes, they were that disturbing), but I'll give this a shot. *curtsey*

Cute... =_=
I'm badass.

Well, I hope you enjoy it. I did.
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Feb 25 2013, 06:55 PM
tbh I don't like many fics. I liked this multishot, though, 'cause it reminded me of a fairytale, so I'd give that a 7/10.

that multishot was good. Needs a sads warning though :(

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Feb 25 2013, 07:44 PM
that multishot was good. Needs a sads warning though :(

Taeyeon was adorable in it, okay. I wanted to hug her, but I can't, because that is a fictional story. :dramaqueen:
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Do you ladies read intense or gang type fics? I've read Life and currently reading the season 2 - Family (Taengsic and Yoonyul), I can't take this anymore, I feel slightly depressed reading it, I don't know why? I'm in the middle of reading Family, but my heart can't handle the story. I can handle drama or angst fics, but this fic is another level for me. :bleak: But I'm still curious what will happened next, and the 3rd season is on-going (Live).
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Should I stop reading or continue? :zonedout:
linku?
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Ok, :'( I'll continue reading - when my mood is good again. Thanks Arti :hug:

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Life, Family, and Live (ongoing)
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I started reading Secrets and confessions and I reached a moment where one of the characters said "Sigh" and started crazy laughing because what you guys said here lmao
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Feb 25 2013, 12:58 AM
Happiness: My Arrival, Your Departure by Neko-Koneko
Main pair: Taeny
Other pairings: Yulsic, some YongSeo (Seohyun & Yong-hwa from CN Blue) and SooSun, little of JeTi and YoonYul.

Just spelling mistakes like fallow instead of follow >_< but others than this, overall, I did enjoy the fic... finished it yesterday.
There's sequel to this but I've yet to start reading and it hasn't been updated, only 3 chapters. Last update was on August 22, 2012 and that author's profile showed she's seen active 2 days ago.
I just finished act II of this fic. Now I usually like non-AU fics but it's weirding me out how gay everyone is. If the pairings you mention happen along with all the pairings that already happened, the SNSD dorm is on the verge of a full on OT9 orgy.
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Happiness: My Arrival, Your Departure by Neko-Koneko
Main pair: Taeny
Other pairings: Yulsic, some YongSeo (Seohyun & Yong-hwa from CN Blue) and SooSun, little of JeTi and YoonYul.

Just spelling mistakes like fallow instead of follow >_< but others than this, overall, I did enjoy the fic... finished it yesterday.
There's sequel to this but I've yet to start reading and it hasn't been updated, only 3 chapters. Last update was on August 22, 2012 and that author's profile showed she's seen active 2 days ago.
I just finished act II of this fic. Now I usually like non-AU fics but it's weirding me out how gay everyone is. If the pairings you mention happen along with all the pairings that already happened, the SNSD dorm is on the verge of a full on OT9 orgy.
haha wow just realized this fic isn't the one I'm reading. -_- Ignore my craziness~~
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Do you ladies read intense or gang type fics? I've read Life and currently reading the season 2 - Family (Taengsic and Yoonyul), I can't take this anymore, I feel slightly depressed reading it, I don't know why? I'm in the middle of reading Family, but my heart can't handle the story. I can handle drama or angst fics, but this fic is another level for me. :bleak: But I'm still curious what will happened next, and the 3rd season is on-going (Live).
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Should I stop reading or continue? :zonedout:
whoa, this fic is still going? i remember reading life when it was ongoing and i still shipped taengsic and i vaguely remember liking it despite feeling it was SUPER slow. maybe i'll get back into it.

speaking of ES, did anyone notice the author updated the first post? so she's alive at least.
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FWB is updated!!
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Feb 26 2013, 12:17 AM
FWB is updated!!
Link?
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FWB is updated!!
I love that fic.
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i dont hang out on sushified much (read: at all) but dang auratus is one pretentious motherfucker lol. not necessarily a bad thing, but it just goes to show how much "presentation" of ideas is valued in fandom vs. substance. maybe because we all essentially have the same stuff to work with as far as what we know about the girls, more or less, so what really counts is how well you present it - with the right mix of authority and telling people what they want to hear, you can get elevated to a pretty high status in the minds of fans... kind of like how garlic operates

more to the point, i've never read his fanfic but if it's anything like his other writing i think i'll pass... am i being unfair
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i dont hang out on sushified much (read: at all) but dang auratus is one pretentious motherfucker lol. not necessarily a bad thing, but it just goes to show how much "presentation" of ideas is valued in fandom vs. substance. maybe because we all essentially have the same stuff to work with as far as what we know about the girls, more or less, so what really counts is how well you present it - with the right mix of authority and telling people what they want to hear, you can get elevated to a pretty high status in the minds of fans... kind of like how garlic operates

more to the point, i've never read his fanfic but if it's anything like his other writing i think i'll pass... am i being unfair
no you're not being unfair and ia with you. honestly i read through most of SHoCH and as much as i did like it because it was fast-paced, i'll never get fandom's obsession with his shit. pretentious long-winded self-indulgent prose masquerading as "intelligent." he does know how to string sentences better than most snsd writers, but that's not really saying much in this fandom.
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Feb 26 2013, 12:17 AM
FWB is updated!!
:shy: finally!

the rated version here
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Do you ladies read intense or gang type fics? I've read Life and currently reading the season 2 - Family (Taengsic and Yoonyul), I can't take this anymore, I feel slightly depressed reading it, I don't know why? I'm in the middle of reading Family, but my heart can't handle the story. I can handle drama or angst fics, but this fic is another level for me. :bleak: But I'm still curious what will happened next, and the 3rd season is on-going (Live).
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Should I stop reading or continue? :zonedout:
I was halfway done with Family when I finally stopped because there was so much drama. Half the characters were killed off and if they weren't killed off, they had a dark past. The story wasn't just realistic because even the most down teenagers don't have that bad of a life. And Fany's characterization was so horrible. I skipped to the end to see what happened and if you don't like eckso, don't finish it.
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I'm re-reading back and forth by d0nkat$u.. I think it's her best? just because it's 0T9 and the storyline is different. A good read.
do you have the link? tia
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A new taeny fanfic

It's really good. The angst and emotions felt so real. A must read :)
omg, just read it.... my feels :bigcry: :bigcry:
Thanks to whichever anon recommended this one. Very good, with the exceptions of a few unchecked errors. I was really feeling the angst.
Is it completed?
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Quoting limited to 3 levels deepA new taeny fanfic
Thanks to whichever anon recommended this one. Very good, with the exceptions of a few unchecked errors. I was really feeling the angst.
Is it completed?
no, it has 12 chapters so far
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I'm re-reading back and forth by d0nkat$u.. I think it's her best? just because it's 0T9 and the storyline is different. A good read.
do you have the link? tia
Here you can donwload it
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Any Endym10n fans here? First part of a new multishot was posted on LJ, riiiight here ~> http://sunkyumelons.livejournal.com/663.html

It's Dandyu! :)
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I'm re-reading back and forth by d0nkat$u.. I think it's her best? just because it's 0T9 and the storyline is different. A good read.
do you have the link? tia
Here you can donwload it
Da. Back and Forth was very average to me. Writing and development is good as usual from donk@tsu, but TaeNy's relationship is too flawed to be saved to me and Yuri was made to be a fool :\

Hyoyeon/Sunny were badass though.
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I was halfway done with Family when I finally stopped because there was so much drama. Half the characters were killed off and if they weren't killed off, they had a dark past. The story wasn't just realistic because even the most down teenagers don't have that bad of a life. And Fany's characterization was so horrible. I skipped to the end to see what happened and if you don't like eckso, don't finish it.
Hehe, Thanks. I continued reading , because after that intense drama - there are sweet moments, the kid is adorable :yes: . Though I expect there are more drama to come since there are more pages/chapters to read. I just got shocked because the author killed some characters, :pain: I don't want them to die and yeah new revelations for some characters - dark past. The misery and anguish that the characters emit got into me - I just feel sad for them.

eckso? - as long as they are not the main character, I'm fine with it.
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Any Endym10n fans here? First part of a new multishot was posted on LJ, riiiight here ~> http://sunkyumelons.livejournal.com/663.html

It's Dandyu! :)
me! thanks :hug: I really wish she'd upload her other fics :sad:
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I haven't read a fic in ages
I always liked jeti ones, some really good writers for that ship.
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Just when you find a fic with a decent looking plot BAM! :shock:

Soshi!male :creys:
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I need more JeTi fics in my life :dramaqueen: :dramaqueen:
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I'm re-reading back and forth by d0nkat$u.. I think it's her best? just because it's 0T9 and the storyline is different. A good read.
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ENDLESS SEASON UPDATED!!!!!!!!!! Asbfhjnsdkmghfdgjnkmsflgagjknmf
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ENDLESS SEASON UPDATED!!!!!!!!!! Asbfhjnsdkmghfdgjnkmsflgagjknmf
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TIME TO GO REREAD THE PREVIOUS CHAPTER
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ENDLESS SEASON UPDATED!!!!!!!!!! Asbfhjnsdkmghfdgjnkmsflgagjknmf
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ENDLESS SEASON UPDATED!!!!!!!!!! Asbfhjnsdkmghfdgjnkmsflgagjknmf
FINALLY!!!! :yes:

might need to read from the beginning to refresh my memory yikes
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