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sa It could have been more developed, I liked the premise and the final part with the cab was nice.
I agree. The similarity to the opening paragraph was a good touch, but it felt like there was a rush to get to the end and there wasn't much chance for the plot to develop organically. It was basically, "omg cliche taeny ~fluff~ omg there is a secret" and Sooyoung rushes in to just explain the entire plot to Tiffany while she just sits there like ok lol
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d0nkatsu's can't help but go back to her twilight type fluff
she tries to write some "hot" scenes, stops and goes to the fluff which becomes 90% of the story. the other 9% is the plot
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d0nkatsu's can't help but go back to her twilight type fluff
she tries to write some "hot" scenes, stops and goes to the fluff which becomes 90% of the story. the other 9% is the plot
I've noticed that she tends to "feed" the plot to you, like have the characters state obvious conclusions or something, which throws me out of the dialogue occasionally.
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Any good Seohyun fics (any pairing is great aside from yoonhyun)? I feel like i've exhausted my list already... :sad:
Choux Pastry Hearts?
Same person who wrote Taeny's absinthe.
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she also went back to the characters saying "sigh" while talking
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sa It could have been more developed, I liked the premise and the final part with the cab was nice.
I agree. The similarity to the opening paragraph was a good touch, but it felt like there was a rush to get to the end and there wasn't much chance for the plot to develop organically. It was basically, "omg cliche taeny ~fluff~ omg there is a secret" and Sooyoung rushes in to just explain the entire plot to Tiffany while she just sits there like ok lol
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d0nkatsu's can't help but go back to her twilight type fluff
she tries to write some "hot" scenes, stops and goes to the fluff which becomes 90% of the story. the other 9% is the plot
She tends to rush things and patches holes with bandaids thinking it'd be ok but it really throws me off balance. Like in Back and Forth (I love the first half and Yoonhyun's development) but the ending...you can tell it was rushed.
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d0nkatsu's can't help but go back to her twilight type fluff
she tries to write some "hot" scenes, stops and goes to the fluff which becomes 90% of the story. the other 9% is the plot
She tends to rush things and patches holes with bandaids thinking it'd be ok but it really throws me off balance. Like in Back and Forth (I love the first half and Yoonhyun's development) but the ending...you can tell it was rushed.
i like her fics don't ask me why lol but she really does rush things i wonder why she does that.
and she always fails when writing hot scenes like the other anon said.
her latest fic had potential but i wonder what happened with it.
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d0nkatsu's can't help but go back to her twilight type fluff
she tries to write some "hot" scenes, stops and goes to the fluff which becomes 90% of the story. the other 9% is the plot
She tends to rush things and patches holes with bandaids thinking it'd be ok but it really throws me off balance. Like in Back and Forth (I love the first half and Yoonhyun's development) but the ending...you can tell it was rushed.
what also bothered me about this last fic of hers, is the repetition of dialogue and interraction
it actually made me annoyed
like taeyeon saying random things or acting strange and tiffany clueless asking "what's wrong?", "what happened?", "what is it" and taeyeon not saying anything or just giving vague answers
this was repeated a lot, it actually made me scroll some parts because it became annoying
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Any good Seohyun fics (any pairing is great aside from yoonhyun)? I feel like i've exhausted my list already... :sad:
Choux Pastry Hearts?
Same person who wrote Taeny's absinthe.
I read that one (I try extra hard to find seosic and seori fics)...but thank you nonetheless
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I also noticed that Don has a tendency to have all of her characters repeat "you know" over and over. I don't know why I find that annoying.
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I sometimes get the "people in glass houses shouldn't throw stones" feeling about fan fiction. It's written by fans for fans, none of whom are professional writers. So I praise excellence when I see it, but I know that I didn't have the balls to do the same thing myself, despite the many files I have on my computer comparing a relationship I know nothing about to one of my own.
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I also noticed that Don has a tendency to have all of her characters repeat "you know" over and over. I don't know why I find that annoying.
You're blowing my mind with the fact that I haven't noticed this. And I thought I knew Donkatsu so well :creys:

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@glass houses anon: Not sure if you keep up with this thread but we've already had a lengthy discussion about what you're getting at starting on page 27 (in case you haven't/want to read)
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What do you guys think of the YulSic fic "Its game over"? I wanted to read it but sometimes I got bored halfway
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I like peppermintmuffin's new one-shot it's really cute fluff. I was hoping she would update either Dreamcatcher or Fallen Arches though..

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I also noticed that Don has a tendency to have all of her characters repeat "you know" over and over. I don't know why I find that annoying.
LOL I have the urge to say this and I never post (I just lurk on this thread) but she always ALWAYS uses "blablalba, remember?" ALWAYS. It's frustrating, but I actually like her fics. Im disappointed with the last one, it looked interesting on the first 3 chapters.
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First Times Final Update!!

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I like peppermintmuffin's new one-shot it's really cute fluff. I was hoping she would update either Dreamcatcher or Fallen Arches though..

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Oh apparently Take Two is a three shot which means it's cleared for me to read :run:

IA the fairytale drabble was nice, light fluff
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First Times....it's already done. *drowns in fluff*
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the final is kind of embarassing tho
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keep breathing isn't it?
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I really like reading this one!
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ugh, this fic always has me blubbering like a baby :creys:
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Ajitofu's Astral Strings chap4 update :D
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BADASS AUTHOR UPDATE PLS.
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BADASS AUTHOR UPDATE PLS.
x2 but is she even in this thread?
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the final is kind of embarassing tho
x2 lol totally.. the part where Tiffany is loud kinda turn me off tbh..
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the final is kind of embarassing tho
x2 lol totally.. the part where Tiffany is loud kinda turn me off tbh..
I think you guys put a lil bit too much expectation on this fic -_-
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Implim rewrote Lighthouse, now known as Four Seasons: Chapter 1

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the final is kind of embarassing tho
x2 lol totally.. the part where Tiffany is loud kinda turn me off tbh..
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The one sidedness of their bedroom relationship peeves me. Maybe that's just me though.
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can anyone recommend me some TaengSic fics? :please:
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x2 lol totally.. the part where Tiffany is loud kinda turn me off tbh..
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The one sidedness of their bedroom relationship peeves me. Maybe that's just me though.
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why they always do that? taeyeon can't get pleasure too? (don't they know how sex works?) it seems like she is a machine to give pleasure to tiffany while feeling nothing
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why they always do that? taeyeon can't get pleasure too? (don't they know how sex works?) it seems like she is a machine to give pleasure to tiffany while feeling nothing
giving pleasure is a pleasure in itself :teehee:
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why they always do that? taeyeon can't get pleasure too? (don't they know how sex works?) it seems like she is a machine to give pleasure to tiffany while feeling nothing
giving pleasure is a pleasure in itself :teehee:
so you think she gets off just by looking?
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Someone needs to write a crackfic where Tiffany is on a mission to get Taeyeon off like five times in one night. Just to balance things out. :teehee:
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Someone needs to write a crackfic where Tiffany is on a mission to get Taeyeon off like five times in one night. Just to balance things out. :teehee:
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guuurrl :sissies: srsly someone do it
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The one sidedness of their bedroom relationship peeves me. Maybe that's just me though.
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why they always do that? taeyeon can't get pleasure too? (don't they know how sex works?) it seems like she is a machine to give pleasure to tiffany while feeling nothing
I can give you some perspective from the writing pov.

It's kinda difficult to write a full-fledge sex scene that engages both characters. I myself tried, in Mountain Inn (which now after reorganizing, Four Season Chapter 6 and 7 I think) and I thought, wow this is hard, now I know why authors always complain about writing sex scenes. You could try your hand at it, if you find it an easy exercise, well done and I'd love to read it, otherwise I think you will experience that writing the scene requires quite a bit of imagination, you have to figure out the positioning (if its realistic), the mood, dialogue if any, type of language, the girls' character in bed etc. I personally find anatomy and positioning the most difficult to write, and when I was writing mine, I pushed myself to finish 'till the end so that Taeyeon got hers as well lol

Also another thing to consider, I think a lot of writers have limited real-life experience in this particular area....



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why they always do that? taeyeon can't get pleasure too? (don't they know how sex works?) it seems like she is a machine to give pleasure to tiffany while feeling nothing
I can give you some perspective from the writing pov.

It's kinda difficult to write a full-fledge sex scene that engages both characters. I myself tried, in Mountain Inn (which now after reorganizing, Four Season Chapter 6 and 7 I think) and I thought, wow this is hard, now I know why authors always complain about writing sex scenes. You could try your hand at it, if you find it an easy exercise, well done and I'd love to read it, otherwise I think you will experience that writing the scene requires quite a bit of imagination, you have to figure out the positioning (if its realistic), the mood, dialogue if any, type of language, the girls' character in bed etc. I personally find anatomy and positioning the most difficult to write, and when I was writing mine, I pushed myself to finish 'till the end so that Taeyeon got hers as well lol

Also another thing to consider, I think a lot of writers have limited real-life experience in this particular area....

That is such a sweeping generalization and a bit unfounded lol.

But I totally understand the rest of what you said.
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