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The author lau0601 started making a recommendation list of Taeny fics on the taeny thread at ssf - LINK

sexy oneshot by Nelly fangurlemo

EDIT: :pain: why the sextoy
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The author lau0601 started making a recommendation list of Taeny fics on the taeny thread at ssf - LINK

sexy oneshot by Nelly fangurlemo

EDIT: :pain: why the sextoy
There were some hot parts but I don't like Taeyeon's character, I'll only comment on the sex part, because this has been bothering me in other fanfics too.

Clit stimulation is often described as a foreplay before the "real" thing and the "real" pleasure, namely penetration. But actually, for women, the greatest pleasure comes from clit stimulation, the other type of orgasm is rarer and you don't need a p3nis/dildo for it because it's easier to stimulate the g-spot with fingers. Don't get me started on virginity and how they lose it with one finger or can't lose it with 3 fingers, because they're not long enough - both scenarios are bs. Authors just don't know what they're writing about.
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The author lau0601 started making a recommendation list of Taeny fics on the taeny thread at ssf - LINK

sexy oneshot by Nelly

EDIT: why the sextoy
There were some hot parts but I don't like Taeyeon's character, I'll only comment on the sex part, because this has been bothering me in other fanfics too.

Clit stimulation is often described as a foreplay before the "real" thing and the "real" pleasure, namely penetration. But actually, for women, the greatest pleasure comes from clit stimulation, the other type of orgasm is rarer and you don't need a p3nis/dildo for it because it's easier to stimulate the g-spot with fingers. Don't get me started on virginity and how they lose it with one finger or can't lose it with 3 fingers, because they're not long enough - both scenarios are bs. Authors just don't know what they're writing about.
personally i didn't like the idea of the strap-on, such a turn off :huh: and I didn't expect it from nelly (who btw put a selca as her profile pic on twatter and she is pretty)
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The author lau0601 started making a recommendation list of Taeny fics on the taeny thread at ssf - LINK

sexy oneshot by Nelly

EDIT: why the sextoy
There were some hot parts but I don't like Taeyeon's character, I'll only comment on the sex part, because this has been bothering me in other fanfics too.

Clit stimulation is often described as a foreplay before the "real" thing and the "real" pleasure, namely penetration. But actually, for women, the greatest pleasure comes from clit stimulation, the other type of orgasm is rarer and you don't need a p3nis/dildo for it because it's easier to stimulate the g-spot with fingers. Don't get me started on virginity and how they lose it with one finger or can't lose it with 3 fingers, because they're not long enough - both scenarios are bs. Authors just don't know what they're writing about.
personally i didn't like the idea of the strap-on, such a turn off :huh: and I didn't expect it from nelly (who btw put a selca as her profile pic on twatter and she is pretty)
yeah, as if good les sex can only exist with a peen substitute :wat:
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yeah, as if good les sex can only exist with a peen substitute :wat:
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Ok, so I wrote a comment to nelly and she took the time to explain why she used the toy:
me: Outside was really sexy and I love your style so much!! but why the sextoy, really a turnoff for me personally...
Nelly: Bcuz Tiffany isn't expecting it, it's not what she originally wants. She wants 'girl sex', she wasn't expecting a strapon. So TY- doesn't give her what she expected: "They never expected what she gave them." And its a contrast between Tiffany's ex bfs and TY.


I think it makes sense now :thumbsup:
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yeah, as if good les sex can only exist with a peen substitute :wat:
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Ok, so I wrote a comment to nelly and she took the time to explain why she used the toy:
me: Outside was really sexy and I love your style so much!! but why the sextoy, really a turnoff for me personally...
Nelly: Bcuz Tiffany isn't expecting it, it's not what she originally wants. She wants 'girl sex', she wasn't expecting a strapon. So TY- doesn't give her what she expected: "They never expected what she gave them." And its a contrast between Tiffany's ex bfs and TY.


I think it makes sense now :thumbsup:
i hate sextoys so ... :wat:

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yeah, as if good les sex can only exist with a peen substitute :wat:
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Ok, so I wrote a comment to nelly and she took the time to explain why she used the toy:
me: Outside was really sexy and I love your style so much!! but why the sextoy, really a turnoff for me personally...
Nelly: Bcuz Tiffany isn't expecting it, it's not what she originally wants. She wants 'girl sex', she wasn't expecting a strapon. So TY- doesn't give her what she expected: "They never expected what she gave them." And its a contrast between Tiffany's ex bfs and TY.


I think it makes sense now :thumbsup:
idk if a strap-on is really that unexpected tbh
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I get tired of reading taeny and yulsic, or yulti and jeti (although jeti can be good, it's not as suspect to the same boring tropes time and time again). There was a seotae fic I read once where Taeyeon was a photographer and Seohyun her apprentice or something, but the author on lj took it down :creys: I wish more writers would write seotae, or just seohyun in general.
late af, but i feel you sm! :dramaqueen:

Tonight (We Are Young) is a good, entertaining fic w/ some seotae.
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The author lau0601 started making a recommendation list of Taeny fics on the taeny thread at ssf - LINK

sexy oneshot by Nelly

EDIT: why the sextoy
There were some hot parts but I don't like Taeyeon's character, I'll only comment on the sex part, because this has been bothering me in other fanfics too.

Clit stimulation is often described as a foreplay before the "real" thing and the "real" pleasure, namely penetration. But actually, for women, the greatest pleasure comes from clit stimulation, the other type of orgasm is rarer and you don't need a p3nis/dildo for it because it's easier to stimulate the g-spot with fingers. Don't get me started on virginity and how they lose it with one finger or can't lose it with 3 fingers, because they're not long enough - both scenarios are bs. Authors just don't know what they're writing about.
personally i didn't like the idea of the strap-on, such a turn off :huh: and I didn't expect it from nelly (who btw put a selca as her profile pic on twatter and she is pretty)
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sexy oneshot by Nelly
personally i didn't like the idea of the strap-on, such a turn off :huh: and I didn't expect it from nelly (who btw put a selca as her profile pic on twatter and she is pretty)
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I stop reading immediately when I see that shit
I agree. Doing it is one thing, writing about it is quite another. It always comes across as something you didn't mean it to.
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There were some hot parts but I don't like Taeyeon's character, I'll only comment on the sex part, because this has been bothering me in other fanfics too.

Clit stimulation is often described as a foreplay before the "real" thing and the "real" pleasure, namely penetration. But actually, for women, the greatest pleasure comes from clit stimulation, the other type of orgasm is rarer and you don't need a p3nis/dildo for it because it's easier to stimulate the g-spot with fingers. Don't get me started on virginity and how they lose it with one finger or can't lose it with 3 fingers, because they're not long enough - both scenarios are bs. Authors just don't know what they're writing about.
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most writers of smut fanfic or are men or straight virgin girls.
they don't know what to write.
they usually take a "formula" already used in other fanfics and put on your own fanfic.
Sometimes I have the feeling of reading a straight sex scene,but with two women.
this fanfic gives me this feeling...and it isn't because of the strap on. I've read smuts where you could see/read that was a lesbian sex scene with strap on.
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here is a gud snsd fic (you're welcome)

it's a (non-au!) murder mystery, pairing is hyotae and it is hotter than hell, but even if you're not into that the best part is the well-executed noir atmosphere and the suspense, so you should still check it out. there are some pretty dark (and heterosexual) implications and shit so if you're really not into having that in your soshi fic i wouldn't read, otherwise HIGHLY RECOMMENDED 10/10 GOOD SHOW ALL AROUND
Sweet! I need more LJ recommendations, I feel many of them are actually good writers that also happen to like soshi, other than the other way around. Idk if that makes sense.
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I think the best writers are on LJ.

list of good writers that I know of:

1) threebits
2) ohsugarandsalt (obviously)
3) firesalt
4) evadinglethargy
there was also lacry something, but I can't find their LJ anymore, which really sucks because I wanted to go back and read some of their works. -_-

Feel free to add, I think they are a lot of underrated works on LJ.
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here is a gud snsd fic (you're welcome)

it's a (non-au!) murder mystery, pairing is hyotae and it is hotter than hell, but even if you're not into that the best part is the well-executed noir atmosphere and the suspense, so you should still check it out. there are some pretty dark (and heterosexual) implications and shit so if you're really not into having that in your soshi fic i wouldn't read, otherwise HIGHLY RECOMMENDED 10/10 GOOD SHOW ALL AROUND
Sweet! I need more LJ recommendations, I feel many of them are actually good writers that also happen to like soshi, other than the other way around. Idk if that makes sense.
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I think the best writers are on LJ.

list of good writers that I know of:

1) threebits
2) ohsugarandsalt (obviously)
3) firesalt
4) evadinglethargy
there was also lacry something, but I can't find their LJ anymore, which really sucks because I wanted to go back and read some of their works. -_-

Feel free to add, I think they are a lot of underrated works on LJ.
Do you mean this lacy ?
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I think the best writers are on LJ.

list of good writers that I know of:

1) threebits
2) ohsugarandsalt (obviously)
3) firesalt
4) evadinglethargy
there was also lacry something, but I can't find their LJ anymore, which really sucks because I wanted to go back and read some of their works. -_-

Feel free to add, I think they are a lot of underrated works on LJ.
Do you mean this lacy ?
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lol my bad, I read it as lacy but yeah, I think that's the one you're finding for.
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Do you mean this lacy ?
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lol my bad, I read it as lacy but yeah, I think that's the one you're finding for.
LOL I did, thank you!

I kept spelling the name wrong :P
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The one sidedness of their bedroom relationship peeves me. Maybe that's just me though.
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why they always do that? taeyeon can't get pleasure too? (don't they know how sex works?) it seems like she is a machine to give pleasure to tiffany while feeling nothing
returning to this topic because Nelly found her way here and wanted to address the issue but didn't feel comfortable to post just yet, so here are her reasons

It's written sort of one sided, not because Taeyeon isn't ever getting satisfied, but because the story is written mostly from TY's POV. I've only written the parts that I think are funny/I think TY would find memorable. I assumed it was just a given that TY would be on the receiving side when I cut away from the scene. But I guess it wasn't clear enough. And from TY's POV, Tiffany's pleasure is something that she's mesmerized. You know, cuz she's been there every time she's had sex before, she's never been there to see Tiff have sex b4 then.
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why they always do that? taeyeon can't get pleasure too? (don't they know how sex works?) it seems like she is a machine to give pleasure to tiffany while feeling nothing
returning to this topic because Nelly found her way here and wanted to address the issue but didn't feel comfortable to post just yet, so here are her reasons

It's written sort of one sided, not because Taeyeon isn't ever getting satisfied, but because the story is written mostly from TY's POV. I've only written the parts that I think are funny/I think TY would find memorable. I assumed it was just a given that TY would be on the receiving side when I cut away from the scene. But I guess it wasn't clear enough. And from TY's POV, Tiffany's pleasure is something that she's mesmerized. You know, cuz she's been there every time she's had sex before, she's never been there to see Tiff have sex b4 then.
Why does she have to be defensive and all? Criticism is criticism. Take it like a mature person.
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returning to this topic because Nelly found her way here and wanted to address the issue but didn't feel comfortable to post just yet, so here are her reasons

It's written sort of one sided, not because Taeyeon isn't ever getting satisfied, but because the story is written mostly from TY's POV. I've only written the parts that I think are funny/I think TY would find memorable. I assumed it was just a given that TY would be on the receiving side when I cut away from the scene. But I guess it wasn't clear enough. And from TY's POV, Tiffany's pleasure is something that she's mesmerized. You know, cuz she's been there every time she's had sex before, she's never been there to see Tiff have sex b4 then.
Why does she have to be defensive and all? Criticism is criticism. Take it like a mature person.
I didn't find it defensive. I appreciate the explanation and the perspective. Also I'm glad she considers and puts thought into what commenters say.

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Anyway it's kind of hard since it's Taeyeon PoV but still in the third person, but there were omniscient third person narrative elements that didn't come from Taeyeon's mind that only focused on Fany. i.e. the third person narrator only said Fany was sore in the morning, never implied anything about Taeyeon being satisfied. Things like this make it seem one sided.
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returning to this topic because Nelly found her way here and wanted to address the issue but didn't feel comfortable to post just yet, so here are her reasons

It's written sort of one sided, not because Taeyeon isn't ever getting satisfied, but because the story is written mostly from TY's POV. I've only written the parts that I think are funny/I think TY would find memorable. I assumed it was just a given that TY would be on the receiving side when I cut away from the scene. But I guess it wasn't clear enough. And from TY's POV, Tiffany's pleasure is something that she's mesmerized. You know, cuz she's been there every time she's had sex before, she's never been there to see Tiff have sex b4 then.
Why does she have to be defensive and all? Criticism is criticism. Take it like a mature person.
what's defensive about her answer ? we made a comment and the girl nicely explained herself.
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There were some hot parts but I don't like Taeyeon's character, I'll only comment on the sex part, because this has been bothering me in other fanfics too.

Clit stimulation is often described as a foreplay before the "real" thing and the "real" pleasure, namely penetration. But actually, for women, the greatest pleasure comes from clit stimulation, the other type of orgasm is rarer and you don't need a p3nis/dildo for it because it's easier to stimulate the g-spot with fingers. Don't get me started on virginity and how they lose it with one finger or can't lose it with 3 fingers, because they're not long enough - both scenarios are bs. Authors just don't know what they're writing about.
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most writers of smut fanfic or are men or straight virgin girls.
they don't know what to write.
they usually take a "formula" already used in other fanfics and put on your own fanfic.
Sometimes I have the feeling of reading a straight sex scene,but with two women.
this fanfic gives me this feeling...and it isn't because of the strap on. I've read smuts where you could see/read that was a lesbian sex scene with strap on.
mte -_-
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There were some hot parts but I don't like Taeyeon's character, I'll only comment on the sex part, because this has been bothering me in other fanfics too.

Clit stimulation is often described as a foreplay before the "real" thing and the "real" pleasure, namely penetration. But actually, for women, the greatest pleasure comes from clit stimulation, the other type of orgasm is rarer and you don't need a p3nis/dildo for it because it's easier to stimulate the g-spot with fingers. Don't get me started on virginity and how they lose it with one finger or can't lose it with 3 fingers, because they're not long enough - both scenarios are bs. Authors just don't know what they're writing about.
omg anon thank you for pointing that out, THANK YOU

please educate them authors :thumbsup:
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(I'm not sure if this has already been asked but...) I have a question: What makes a fanfic good or bad? Also..... How is a character developed in a story? LOL. Don't mind this silly question, I'm really curious. Partly because I want to know how to improve on my writing and I don't know who or where else to ask. :sad2:
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(I'm not sure if this has already been asked but...) I have a question: What makes a fanfic good or bad? Also..... How is a character developed in a story? LOL. Don't mind this silly question, I'm really curious. Partly because I want to know how to improve on my writing and I don't know who or where else to ask. :sad2:
Personally, I like good, consistent characterisation, decent pacing, solid plot and at least average writing.
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Hey guys. I'm looking for this taeny fic where Taeyeon is an artist and Tiffany is her creation/statue which she falls in love with. It's a really unusually story but I think I liked it. Anybody knows what this fic is?
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(I'm not sure if this has already been asked but...) I have a question: What makes a fanfic good or bad? Also..... How is a character developed in a story? LOL. Don't mind this silly question, I'm really curious. Partly because I want to know how to improve on my writing and I don't know who or where else to ask. :sad2:
For your development question, in terms of characterization, always keep this in mind: show your reader, don't tell your reader. Don't say Jill is a caring, sensitive person; write a scene that shows why and how she is caring. Don't say Jane and Jill fell madly in love, show how they did it; their emotions, their dialogue, their intimacy should be tools used to show it.

Then development follows in the same way, use events and actions to shape your character, not description. For well paced, consistent development, you have to really plan and have a plot and character arc mapped out so that you don't drag and fall into lulls.
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Hey guys. I'm looking for this taeny fic where Taeyeon is an artist and Tiffany is her creation/statue which she falls in love with. It's a really unusually story but I think I liked it. Anybody knows what this fic is?
Confessions of a Love Stricken Artist
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(I'm not sure if this has already been asked but...) I have a question: What makes a fanfic good or bad? Also..... How is a character developed in a story? LOL. Don't mind this silly question, I'm really curious. Partly because I want to know how to improve on my writing and I don't know who or where else to ask. :sad2:
For your development question, in terms of characterization, always keep this in mind: show your reader, don't tell your reader. Don't say Jill is a caring, sensitive person; write a scene that shows why and how she is caring. Don't say Jane and Jill fell madly in love, show how they did it; their emotions, their dialogue, their intimacy should be tools used to show it.

Then development follows in the same way, use events and actions to shape your character, not description. For well paced, consistent development, you have to really plan and have a plot and character arc mapped out so that you don't drag and fall into lulls.
Thanks! Whoever you are and Arti. I'll be sure to keep that in mind. ^^
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