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Distiungishing Features; WDC's abaondoned Bday fic
Topic Started: Sep 2 2013, 07:08 (75 Views)
Ama
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When you pulled your head out of your ass and thought about it, life was pretty empty.

"Study whatever you want and the money will follow."

These were the words his father had told him when he was leaving for college. But if you

had nothing to interest you, let alone love what path could you choose?

Since hot chicks weren't a major, and gynocology would take way too much effort, he

quickly switched his major from British Literature to Mechanical engeneering.

Love wasn't an option. After all his father had never loved him, didn't think he was sexy.

It was all his drunken father's fault he'd seek out hot female poontang since feelings

weren't an option.

Feelings weren't an option and scoring hot chicks weren't an option either since his looks,

youth and hair had started to thin out. He's blame that on his father as well, though the

bastard had a full head of hair at sixty years old.

"Mr. Garrison. Mr. Garrison!" The named man's thoughts were shattered to the new harsh

reality that once again he found himself at his desk in front of his classroom of half brain

dead little bastards.
touch screen phones really suck.
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Apparently it had potential this story. I feel a little sad for WDC :(
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I kind of forgot what it was supposed to be about. Something about Ike? Can't remember. Nice flashback/reflection, though.
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you wanted me to do my in the chaecters head this for Mr garrison, which i was going for the recorder concert garrison blaming his father. i think i was going through my college degrees are bullshit phase (maybe its not such a phase)

i found some fan fiction advice article a long time ago about what a cheap cop out it was to tag who is speaking by their features. such as the hooded boy or the pissed off girl wearing the dio hoodie. wdc is way guilty of this, also madam red rose. i know garrison was going to get mad in his own head and hrs announces self study groups for the class so he can ignore them and i guess call his father to tell him off or Mr slave. the joke was in the background Kyle and carton start a typical argument with them only being tagged as the Jew and fat ass. the other classmates get into the conversation and fight as well but they're tagged by features as well. Craig and Stan both have blue hats, kenny and butter are both blond. Craig clyde token jimmy timmy were all to be involved but the point was to make the background as confusing as possible.

this idea wouldve been hard as fuck to pull off and i regret not getting it done since wdc has been so awesome to me.
touch screen phones really suck.
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Huh... The only problem I see with this that you're just stating a problem and not offering any solutions. Okay, now I know that it might get confusing and I probably see where it's coming from... Tagging is a pretty much acceptable trick when writing in Polish, as opposed to repetitions, we don't take kindly to those round here. I'll remember it now and as a fanfiction writer, I'd like to say: I'm sorry. I'm sorry. Sorry...

But again, to include more quotes from the Coon and Friends trilogy, what should I do? Should I not include any tagging and make the lines more recognisable for each of the characters? Should I star less background characters in my fics so that they don't get confused with the mains? Should I stick to script style writing and not worry about the repetitions there? What should I do, meeehm?! TELL ME!!

But seriously, what's the right thing to do? ^^
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