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| Gold Star; Probably my best idea ever that'll never be | |
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| Ama | Sep 2 2013, 07:09 Post #1 |
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"So in conclusion, my first taste of toloerance with homosexuals was defending my gay dog. Stan set down his paper and looked up at the peer review group. Silence. His hand instictivly reached up to rub the back of his neck, but he knew better and rubbed his nose with the back of his hand instead. Still silence. "So what did you guys think? Annie?" "Good." "Yeah it was fair." "That's it?" Writing was a scary thing. If you cared about it anyway. You could put your entire self into it, the rot in your soul, the soar of your heart and all the multi dementions of emotion and experence in between and hope someone else kind enough to read comes away feeling similar. If they liked it, cheers. Stan had done his job. But sometimes you get- "That's it? Did you even try this time or were you drunk again?" "You're not getting shit from me." Cartman hugged his sheet of gold star stickers not unlike the hoarder Stan had once been. "Well what did you guys score for me?" "Gold, defintly." Bebe looked between her creative writing group, Cartman wasn't budging but no one was expecting anything from him. Annie would give anyone an excellet grade, she was really nice. But Bebe loathed the dumb blonde sterotype, like it was some great feat to use her common sense. She sighed and pulled forward a silver star. "Maybe you could've been more discriptive." "Thanks. That's legitimate advice." Stan tallied the score in his head. "A C, great I'm average again." |
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| Coyote Smith | Sep 2 2013, 14:20 Post #2 |
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Well, it was great idea indeed. It also remembered me the epiosde in which inadevertedly they helped to aprove gay marriage
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| Wensleydale | Sep 24 2013, 10:00 Post #3 |
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You should get comedy gold stars for every remark on Stan being average ^^ Seem like a good fic to reflect on the less parodied aspects of fanfiction - reviews. With some references to your RL, since you've got creative writing classes, right? |
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| Ama | Sep 24 2013, 17:08 Post #4 |
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2011/first half of 2012 was a great year for fit writing and 2012/first half of 2013 was a great beat social wise but I've lost both. if i really had it in me id try to keep writing this one. the idea was through some circumstance the current creative writing group mentioned above gets suck grading and critiquing all of the classs work with them choosing the difficult task of someone winning a prize. i know stans going to get an ego about it like butterballs and scaus for applause, bebe will be trying yo be only sane woman since i still really like her. cartmans being selfish and super harsh on everyone's work and Annie's freaking out since she always had the biggest crush on stan and now has excuses to be around him outside of class. i know i wanted bebe to give her the same speech she gave Wendy in chef goes nanners. i think Annie remembers miss Ellen and ends up writing a beautiful shirt story about her feeling that ends up winning the prize but she's afraid and never admits the wrote it. the end joke being too bad the winner ended up being an anonymous Annie. puns. derp. |
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